hmmm... what is there to say...
keep workin on those character stories. here is a site for some writing tips: http://www.icefire.co.uk/Pages/writingtips.html?1234650996905
Part One is rewrittin and is now getting edited as i rewrite Part Two
238 pages (104,119 words) of story so far, and in theory we are only about half way done. O.O
Our Alias is now: Nicholas Worcester